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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-14 10:39 PM




I used to go to symphony's
They were so fun
My first love asked me out there
He made the night great



One night a famious singer came on there
It was so lovely
to hear her voice
her heart was so full of poise

Stephen was a wonder just to be around
infact he was the best boyfriend
that I have ever found

Things ended up tough and rough
but we had our good times
during the times we were together
I felt so safe with him
I was beginning to feel
that it would last forever

But Symphony's were the one things we did
I got to listen to alot of instriments
They sounded so beautiful
It just felt so much like a charm
That will lighten up
whatever you are feeling

These were one the best days of my life
That I will never forget
it will be missed
Stephen was my true first Kiss


Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-09-14 10:47 PM


Angelic One ~

A sweet remembrance of your first kiss! One never to be forgotten!

Love & Light,
EA

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-09-15 12:43 PM


and they do tend to end with a bang

Bodger

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
3 posted 2005-09-15 12:44 PM


Love the feeling . Sweet poem you wrote here of first love.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

4 posted 2005-09-15 05:46 PM


Angel,
This is very tender and full of innocence.
A sweet rememberance for sure. Enjoyed, seems so long ago

SG

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