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AllyKat
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since 2005-01-30
Posts 73
jeffersonville,in

0 posted 2005-09-14 08:03 PM


Tired and worn out
You leave me here to lay.
In peace, my body longs
for your touch.
Your warm arms wrapped
around my body.
My head let lay upon your chest.
The beating of you heart,
sets a beat of our love.
Your hands touch mine and
my body fills up
with heat.
Then your soft lips brush
against my forehead.
Yet again you leave me,
like i'm dead.
Leaving me longing for your touch
one last,
chilling time.

I remember us together
I remember the times we shared
I remember when we loved eachother
I remember when you once cared.

© Copyright 2005 Allison Himmelheber - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
1 posted 2005-09-14 09:23 PM


Beautifully written. Love the poem.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-14 09:44 PM


This sounds like one of those touched poems where the gentle touch of a kiss just smoothens your soul   This is well said I shall say and thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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