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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-09-14 10:13 AM



How little
It takes
To bring you near

Through a glow
Of soft yellow light—

The silent summer rain


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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-09-14 10:15 AM


Now, this is a gem of a little write and I slipping it into my library. Thankyou for this. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2005-09-14 11:46 AM


As gentle as September...your words flow softly and warm the heart....*big hugs*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-09-14 12:58 PM


As soft as a September rain...
lovely piece!
Hugs~Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-26 03:43 PM


beautiful! but I can not find logic.

enjoyed  as always.

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