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scorpio
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0 posted 2005-09-14 09:27 AM



Dance Me

Fingers laced together.
Bodies musically touching.
Dancing cheek to cheek

believe in what your heart feels...

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-09-14 09:46 AM


scorpio
And your writing made me weak.

scorpio
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2 posted 2005-09-14 09:58 AM


Sy I hope this didn't sap your strength too much.  Thank you for your kind support.

believe in what your heart feels...

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-09-14 10:08 AM


BEAUTIFUL scorpio!  Nicely done.
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4 posted 2005-09-14 10:11 AM


oooh, very romantic. love this. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-09-14 01:02 PM


Do you have any idea how good it is to see you posting again?

This is lovely and inspiring.
Yes..indeed...dance me!

~Hugs, Smiles & Luv ya, Tinker~

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Bodger
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6 posted 2005-09-14 03:11 PM


I'd believe you

Good words

Bodger

Angelheart
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7 posted 2005-09-14 05:06 PM


Very nice.. this is good but sweet but even some of the smaller poems can turn out to be real nice..thanks for sharing...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

SmartChick
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8 posted 2005-09-14 05:11 PM


Very beautiful. I remember thos days. Wish they were here again.
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2005-09-14 06:13 PM


Oh, my! Is that an invitation? ~ I've got my dancing shoes ready! Shoe


Linda

scorpio
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10 posted 2005-09-14 09:13 PM


Thank you Donna.  Your are support is much appreciated.

Chris thank you.  I'm pleased you liked this.

Enchanted one thank you.  You flatter me.  And I'll do my best to post a few more.  Now go get your dancing shoes.

Thank you Bodger.

Laura you comments were appreciated.  Thank you.

Those days are not lost Smart Chick.  Dream and you will hear the music once again.  Thank you for your reply.

Thank you Linda.  I don't dance well you may be disappointed.

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2005-09-14 09:30 PM


Hey! Not so close...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

iliana
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12 posted 2005-09-16 07:10 PM


Love it!  I remember when.........jo
scorpio
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13 posted 2005-09-16 07:34 PM


LOL...thank you Larry.  Isn't the idea to dance close??

Thank you Iliana for your support. Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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14 posted 2005-09-16 08:45 PM



Once more around the floor Scorpio...

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

scorpio
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15 posted 2005-09-16 08:54 PM


Tinker you pick the music. And I'll dance with you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Klassy Lassy
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16 posted 2006-03-12 07:11 AM


mmmmm!  to give your feet wings and your heart, too!  Love this.

~ Karen

scorpio
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17 posted 2006-03-12 09:25 AM


Thank you Karen for reading and commenting.

believe in what your heart feels...

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