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Open Poetry #36

valley of mimes

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-14 07:38 AM

hemingway’s robusto noontide
breastfeeding cashmere crayons
into the wax sheathed heartbeats
of a sky with holes in her shoes
and painted toe holiness

silly is the voice of the wind
when she skates her belly laughter
through the gunny sack meadows
green socked with a samaritan’s moss
and the damp of puppy spit evenings

the statues of autumn set their shiver
to a low vibration under rivers
only the ripple people know when
they will bring their party
in cellophane chilled prescriptions

and stuff the mouth cracks yawning
from under the sycamore and olive
with liquor binged applications
like epozy transparently drowning
the last gasp efforts of summer

to be nude tan sandy afternoons

___________

dark

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2005-09-14 07:48 AM

hemingway’s robusto noontide
breastfeeding cashmere crayons
into the wax sheathed heartbeats
of a sky with holes in her shoes
and painted toe holiness
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that verse alone is more poetically brilliant than i have words for...

the statues of autumn set their shiver
to a low vibration under rivers

you rock, you rock, you rock!!!!

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out ...
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-09-14 08:24 AM

the last gasp efforts of summer

~*~

Oh, how she hangs on
to the long limbs
of sunlight...

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-14 08:28 AM

THIS IS VERY INTERESTING...THANKS FOR SHARING..

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-09-14 08:46 AM

ms jm..
thanks for the rock babe!

_____________

ms sun..thank you for
wearing this slice of pen
for the moment

_____________

ms angel,,thank you for the interest
and interesting reply

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