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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-09-14 07:36 AM


I Do Not Like

I do not like to sad the day
I would the sun to shine your way
I would the music of the fife
Bring you more a happy life

I would your wiles to stay in store
To stay more than a smile or more
To offer you a daisy pluck
To end the last on just good luck

I know sometimes it’s not a choice
But there’s in you an inner voice
To quell the waters of the well
And dip again to change the spell

Yes dip once more the very spore
Deep into the very core
I can but offer you a sigh
Since you’re the captain of your dye

Be they blue or brown or green
It’s you that plant the seeds of scene


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2005-09-14 07:44 AM


I know sometimes it’s not a choice
But there’s in you an inner voice
To quell the waters of the well
And dip again to change the spell

Yes dip once more the very spore
Deep into the very core
I can but offer you a sigh
Since you’re the captain of your dye

Be they blue or brown or green
It’s you that plant the seeds of scene

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yer so cool Im breaking out the Kool-aid *L*
those verses are so full of wisdom and light, it makes night right. *S*
I'll raise your sigh and offer in a *winkie*

*ww*



Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-09-14 08:21 AM


JM,
It’s true you are my Tinkerbelle
And sent my Randy there to dwell
But must confess get off my chest
He is a dragonfly at best  
WW

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-09-14 08:35 AM



Sending for this one, Sy...

Good morning!

scorpio
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4 posted 2005-09-14 08:45 AM


I hope the sun is shining on you today Sy.  Well written.

believe in what your heart feels...

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2005-09-14 08:49 AM


dragonfly, butterfly ... both have wings of sky ...
matters not to me, both you and he make me sigh.



  




    

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2005-09-14 09:04 AM


Just what I needed to read today because although we know we sometimes forget.  Thanks.
Enchantress
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7 posted 2005-09-14 09:15 AM


Beautiful sunny write this morn Sy!
Have yourself a wonderful day.
~Warm hugs and smiles, Nancy~

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

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8 posted 2005-09-14 09:38 AM


Seymour~

'To offer you a daisy pluck
To end the last on just good luck'


LOVE the 'daisy pluck'~
You are a jewel of a wordmaster~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-09-14 09:44 AM


Sunshine
Sending you a for yours.

scorpio
That's why I moved to florida. LOL

JM,
You're just too cute.

Honeybunch
Have a good one.

Nancy,
And warm hugs back my little tea leaf.

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just out of reach
10 posted 2005-09-14 10:18 AM


Bringing us all another wonderful write.
A sweet and loving piece Seymour.
Thankyou for this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Startime55
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11 posted 2005-09-14 11:42 AM


You bring sunshine filled with joy into our hearts with words that weave magical delight...Thank you for this beautiful poem...*big hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-09-14 02:46 PM


Marge,
And you are a love.

Chris,
And thank you for being you.

Startime55
And big hugs back for your reply.

SmartChick
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13 posted 2005-09-14 05:28 PM


This is truely a delightful read, Sy. I always do enjoy your poems. Even though, I don't always reply.
Angelheart
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14 posted 2005-09-14 05:32 PM


This was good, like a friendship poem, this is great!!!!  Thanks for sharing this..

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-09-14 05:33 PM


SmartChick
LOL glad you did this time.

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2005-09-14 05:58 PM


Oh, Mr. T., I am tucking this one away! You are so right you know! But of course! You are a very sage sonneteer! You haven't lived all those venerable years without gaining some wisdom along the way!

~ "Be they blue or brown or green
It’s you that plant the seeds of scene"

I think I'll plant a field of daisies! Flowers


EA
Flowers



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17 posted 2005-09-14 06:01 PM


A very positive tune Sir Sy...thank you,
much needed and enjoyed.

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2005-09-14 06:40 PM


Angelheart
Thank you for reading it.

Earth Angel
LOL plant some clover too, four leaf.

Magnus
Thank you my friend.

MGROVES
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19 posted 2005-10-01 08:35 AM


thanks for the smile in my heart

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2005-10-01 08:36 AM


MGROVES
Thank you for going back.

Martie
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21 posted 2005-10-01 05:02 PM


Sy...I missed this before, but need it still today!  
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2005-10-01 05:48 PM


Martie,
Thank you sweety.

iliana
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23 posted 2005-10-01 07:21 PM


Oh, Sir Sy, this is such a sweet treat!  Your poems are a treasure trove!

    

Wish I had a daisy to hand you.  Maybe, this one will do.  
     

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2005-10-01 07:30 PM


iliana
You found a beauty, send it over right away.

iliana
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25 posted 2005-10-01 07:34 PM


Now, wouldn't that be a trick!  LOL!  
Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2005-10-01 09:08 PM


iliana
Yes it would. LOL

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27 posted 2005-10-02 12:14 PM


lovely SY....
Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2005-10-02 08:19 AM


Greeneyes
Thank you dear.

Earth Angel
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29 posted 2005-10-03 01:14 PM


That is quite the present that iliana sent to you! Flirty 2
Seymour Tabin
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30 posted 2005-10-03 01:29 PM


Earth Angel
I think so. LOL

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31 posted 2005-10-03 03:17 PM


this was quite good my hat's off to you

-may the force be with you in poetry

Seymour Tabin
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32 posted 2005-10-03 03:48 PM


Sharksbean
Thank you, thank you.

serenity blaze
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33 posted 2005-10-03 06:28 PM


I miss you sy.

And oh you are good medicine today.

Seymour Tabin
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34 posted 2005-10-03 09:59 PM


serenity,
My love I missed you more then I can say.

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