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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2005-09-13 07:42 PM



to feel joy
       to dance
  
to feel love
     to sing

to hold someone
     to celebrate

to know fear
      and be comforted

to know anger
     and feel ashamed

to know that you are cared for
     to care

all these things I need
     to be
    
  


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Nightshade
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1 posted 2005-09-13 10:33 PM


Don't we all need these?
Very nice write.
Always enjoy reading your poetry.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
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2 posted 2005-09-13 10:38 PM


and all these things can happen..just keep at it, and you will know what to do Good poem and thanks for sharing this here...
SimplyGold
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3 posted 2005-09-14 10:23 AM


Thank you Nightshade for your kind reply.


SG

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2005-09-14 10:25 AM


Angelheart, yes it is to be in the moment that I do not want to miss. Thank you for your reply.



SG

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-09-14 06:43 PM


SG ~ and may you have all those things and simply Be!

I found myself nodding and smiling as I read this spirited right write!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

SimplyGold
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6 posted 2005-09-16 11:32 AM


EA,

I'm glad that I made you smile. You have done that for me many times over. Appreiciate you much!


SG

SimplyGold
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7 posted 2005-09-16 11:34 AM


Nightshade,

Many thanks to you for your kind words. I will refer back to them when I am at a loss and my muse has gone. You are a sweetie for the giving me such encouragement.


SG

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