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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-09-13 05:38 PM


Diamond Head by Moonlight

Late at night
they don't want
you up there,
not that I care.
Menehunes have always
been possessive
of the moon.
Especially on bright
full moon nights,
like tonight,
when my sweethearts
far from home
and I don't want
to be alone.

JamesLee
September12
2005
Just writing.
I'm a moon lover.
My sweetheart
is close...

© Copyright 2005 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-13 05:43 PM


Aaww that is sweet.. but sad, missing your sweetheart..i hope you dont stay lonely.....
yv
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 574

2 posted 2005-09-13 07:23 PM


Gorgeous...words...they...they just aren't there!  Lovely!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-09-15 07:39 PM


Thank you Angelheart and yv for the nice response...when you care for someone you miss them, even if they are only gone for a matter of hours...James
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