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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2005-09-13 04:49 PM


I sit here and wonder,
Why these tears flow,
People tell me I’m grown,
This I know,
So they say don’t cry,
Grow a back bone.

So much on my mind,
Heartache, pain, loneliness,
Emotions I can’t handle on my own.


Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2005 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-09-13 07:21 PM


Just because we are grown ... doesn't mean that we no longer feel sad or lonely.
Good write. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

yv
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2 posted 2005-09-13 07:22 PM


You will not be on your own when feeling these emotions.  You are in grand company.  And...I had to learn this the long and winding road way...tears are nothing to be ashamed of...they are what make one human!  Don't be ashamed of them!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2005-09-14 01:13 PM


Hockeychick,

All these things are tough but, that is what makes us human. Only the dead feel no more. Be kind to yourself it is just life.

We all feel these things, we just learn to get up and do it all again. Sometimes there is no graceful way of falling.

Nice writing,

SG


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4 posted 2005-09-14 02:09 PM


Kel, I am an OLDIE and I still cry when frustrated and sad!  I nearly flooded this house watching Katrina wreak havoc on thousands of people and animals.
Ponder your strengths, and focus on your positive hopes and dreams for tomorrow.

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