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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-09-13 04:11 PM



She is wine tasted slow over
sensitive crevices of thought
and tongue with closed eye prayers
whispered spirits along the spine
in candle light at midnight
his tears ahce a longing that
begs fulfillment

she answers his call
unaware of the fall

sweet the quake of songs sung
along hidden places of heart
oh, how his lips part just so
and the nectar of his breath
inspire a craving
deep within his beautiful eyes
there is love kissed with sadness

if only, she thinks, if only this
love...

and he touches, just enough to
make her stay
just enough to hold sway
just enough for another day

she is the wine of his furtile
thoughts tasted slow
yes, he will share with whispers
enticing the senses invitingly

once you care,

ensnared...

~tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-13-2005 05:24 PM).]

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2005-09-13 04:37 PM


This is heady.  Beautiful.  You have a couple of typos that detracted a little from it, but all in all, this is intoxicating.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2005-09-13 05:25 PM


<>Thank you Nan,

*hugs*

~tier

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2005-09-13 06:28 PM


every line touched me~~

M

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4 posted 2005-09-13 06:41 PM


very thick and beautiful..
yv
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5 posted 2005-09-13 07:13 PM


Beautiful!  The poetry in that was well delivered and completely heartfelt...well...that is to say...my heart felt it!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

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