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Open Poetry #36

saye shadow's vale

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-13 07:25 AM

you spin the rings round the wonder trees
like the clouds when they dress up for sundays
and christian themselves as proper skys

I day dream of your colorado alpine
when your legs are hard hike thighed
and you have the quiver flesh rushing

like the spring streams birthing reflections
and I know you want to run down hill dangerous
pretending the shadows are stubborn suitors

that have to earn their way into your sun
not just one of them but more you say
so there is diversity and competition

and a jealous night when you dawn them
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dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-09-13 07:40 AM

The only word
that comes to mind
is

fey

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-09-13 07:40 AM

You've been amazing me with your abilities for years now, and each read is more amazing than the last.

Good Morning D and waving at ya from here.
HUGS ~D~

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-09-13 07:56 AM

hmmmm, eclectic in interests and needing a challenge...that describes me to a T. although I know this wasn't written about me...certainly does fit the bill..hehe...good one DS

challenge keeps the mind active and youthful...

Hugs for this

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