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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-09-13 01:25 AM


Pitch Conversations

I would have loved to be
your warm embrace
upon the cushioned sanctuary
of misunderstood lovers
but the cracks in the cement
from city scar weathering
created ravines filled with impossibility
so, settled I sat
upon antenna's cellular wavelength frequency
carried through a medium of wind and laughter
thoughts and dry humor poured
from mouth to ear
in simple but smooth splendor
i would have loved to be
your hand healing medicine
to discard the crick
that plagued your neck
i would have loved to
share the screaming floor boards
and scuttling mouse
of your old house
but the miles and prices were overbearing
please forgive me.

(This is a poem i wrote a little while ago. It is, perhaps, the only poem that i have written recently that actually encompasses all of my thoughts as they appeared within my mind. Enjoy)

nice use of muffin



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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-09-13 07:29 AM


...I would have loved to be
your hand healing medicine...

~*~

This line reached out...
yes it did.

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