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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2005-09-12 03:29 PM



Louisiana

twas not the glitter,
from the city of Naw’leans
that made this a great city
in the beautiful state of Louisiana
but the heritage from South Pass
to Monroe,
to Shreveport,
to Lake Charles
as with all of Southeast

as one travels:
thru the bayou
down the bayou
around the bayou
over the bayou
not east nor west
it just doesn’t exist
along with north nor south

a great heritage of people
that binds together,
completing the backbone
continuing to strive
they call it re-build
for the people
that lost everything,

everything,
but who they are
realizing
it’s not a re-build
but a continuation of themselves’
to take what is only their own
doing whatever it takes
however long it takes
for the power of an Louisianan
is a much better strength
as it gets harder and harder
to conquer the tasks at hand.

to re-store the life’s of many
for re-gain,
that which is their’s
life to exist with freedom
choice’s for themselves
to make the decision’s

for the great has been there
and is still
the
Louisianan
.
.
.
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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1 posted 2005-09-12 03:33 PM


Amen, and definately BRAVA BSlicker!  

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-09-12 08:10 PM


"everything,
but who they are
realizing
it’s not a re-build
but a continuation of themselves’
to take what is only their own
doing whatever it takes
however long it takes
for the power of an Louisianan
is a much better strength
as it gets harder and harder
to conquer the tasks at hand."


enjoyed your words

M

iliana
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3 posted 2005-09-12 09:34 PM


Well said, Bernie...so well said!   ....jo
SoundWaves
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4 posted 2005-09-12 10:26 PM


Exellent write Bernie!

The spotlight can only get brighter.

Angelheart
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5 posted 2005-09-12 10:58 PM


Very Nice.....  Thanks for sharing

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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6 posted 2005-09-13 10:03 AM


a touch of a caring heart.....nicely said

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There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-09-13 05:43 PM


Enjoyed reading these thoughts...James
Angelheart
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8 posted 2005-09-13 05:56 PM


Very nice..sharing, I thankyou so very for

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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