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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-09-12 02:05 PM




Into a radiant butterfly she has grown
baring her heart, her soul she has shown.
Beauty and grace depict her delicate side
in her waves of thought, we get lost in her tides~

In her ocean of dreams our minds slip away
lost in her tenderness, a wish made to stay.
Through eyes of emerald her inner light shines
her words of perfection, flavored like  fine wine~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Her gift is her words with eloquent artistry strong
we love our dear Greeneyes, come listen to her song.


{Dedicated with the same love today
as it was three years ago dear Lady Lauren..
sis....}

revised 9-12-05


live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

© Copyright 2005 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2005-09-12 02:11 PM


LittleGentleOne~
This is a fine tribute to a super poetess~
You are such a sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-09-12 02:21 PM


Adorable Donna, it is very apparent to me why you and Lovely Lauren are kindred sisters...


Linda


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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2005-09-12 02:25 PM


Donna, thank you for such a caring heart....I appreciated this then, as now....

love you sister of my heart.....

HUGSSSS....

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-09-12 02:44 PM


Marge, Linda thanks bunches gals..

Lady L, I remember the day you walked in on this one as if it were just yesterday...

Timeless....yah.  Thats the way to describe our friendship....

Timeless.
Love ya butterfly sis!

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
5 posted 2005-09-12 07:43 PM


"Hmm  hmmm .. mmmmm .. hmmm ..."

        just humming along!!!  

   a beautiful poem for a beautiful soul.


         CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-09-12 08:16 PM


Love reading you Donna~~

Lovely write


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Martie
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7 posted 2005-09-12 08:32 PM


Donna

Sweetly gifted to a lovely lady!  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2005-09-12 09:02 PM


Gentle Spirit
A delight to read.

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