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Open Poetry #36

Sijo To the Darkness 1

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-09-12 01:46 PM

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Where is time? In dark or light? Why is time a wrong or right?
I feel dark with its chilling, I feel day with its warming.
I walk both, within and without them, solitude, that is my sin.

Gloom

Explanation of Sijo at http://www.geocities.com/profgloom/altforms/sijo.html

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-09-12 02:32 PM

As always....your writing has taught me something and left me wishing that I had you for a "real" Professor in my life.
Thankyou for this. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-09-12 08:09 PM

within and without ...about all I could muster for now~~~

a nice walk at times

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-09-12 09:53 PM

Impressive, Mr. Gloom!

....jo

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2005-09-12 10:24 PM

Thank you, Niteshade,
I am pleased you enjoyed, I did begin a series of lesson plans
To teach poetry forms or Poetics,
But never went more than a few lessons.

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Passing through and feeling something from the midst
Is the true teacher of something.
A pleasure to see your words beneath mine.

Thank you, iliana,
Trying not to impress, just express,
Using a different form.

Gloom

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