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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-09-11 08:41 PM

Day slips in
Across the threshold,
Nodding as it reaches for us with
Careless abandon,
Every moment in place.

With new resolve
I pull you along,
Turning into the light that
Heals the deepest wound.

Melt into the day with me -
Escape the sorrow that holds you.

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

1 posted 2005-09-11 09:32 PM

The imagery is what captured my attention. Enjoyed!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-09-11 09:32 PM

well, I could have used this this morning...bad night last night

good write

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-11 09:55 PM

aaww sorry for your bad nite passing..and i did like this one..thanks for sharing...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-09-11 09:56 PM

thank you Laura

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

5 posted 2005-09-12 03:10 PM

Ready!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-09-13 05:23 PM

Enjoyed...James

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

7 posted 2005-09-13 07:20 PM

Gorgeous...I loved it. Que hermosa...Chicita!! Also...and maybe it's just me...I am intrigued by the way the last two lines end with the dominating emotion that most feel in a relationship..."you and me!" Brilliant!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Nightshade