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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-11 12:57 PM



(puff)
I see you there love me
I see you there touch me
I gotta go whereever you are
gotta go where-ever you run
you gotta be there right beside me
you better go before your eyes
you better hope that i can touch you
right beneath the skies


I say you love
I say you love
I say you love


YOu better watch out where you go
you better watch out before you run
you better right before your eyes
you better see if I am going to run after you
you better see it
you better feel it
my love cant cant be wrong
You better love it
You better need it
cause I am prove you wrong


I gonna get you
I am going to fly you up to the sky
you better hold it with your love
you better hold it with your love
cause i am going to prove
I am going to prove you wrong
I am going to prove you wrong
I am going to prove you wrong


you better watch out for your eyes
you better hope you dont touch the sky
cause I'm going to hold you
I am going to hold you day and nite
You better watch out for your eyes
I am going to prove you wrong

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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
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1 posted 2005-09-11 03:37 PM


This was so beautifully written. I could feel the emotion in this piece.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-09-11 08:06 PM


reads just like a song...a beautiful one
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
3 posted 2005-09-11 09:46 PM


Passing, It is a song and I can sing the lyrics to it.  thanks for your wonderful response
Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
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jax
4 posted 2005-09-27 03:01 PM


great poem/song angelheart you rock

-may the force be with you in poetry

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