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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-09-11 09:26 AM


Re write:


The Tear

I marvel at the tears display
A muse that fills my head
Of all the passions brought to play
The recipe of wed

How of each or more of one
Compose the salty clear
And why the mix when all is done
Collected in a tear

Emotions clearly make the flame
That simmers in its plight
The choir rings of joy and blame
To bring about its bite

Shaped into elliptic splendor
When pregnant full and ripe
In spite its source, even gender
And gone in just one swipe

Enough have fallen human dwell
To surely squelch the flame of hell


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-09-11 09:33 AM


"Shaped into elliptic splendor
When pregnant full and ripe
In spite its source, even gender
And gone in just one swipe

Enough have fallen human dwell
To surely squelch the flame of hell"

Well you would think so Sy..so many tears have been shed.
Very well written and much enjoyed the read this sunny Sunday.
& , Nancy

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-09-11 10:05 AM



Crying 1

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2005-09-11 10:29 AM


Wonderfully written Sy.  The last lines are very profound.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-09-11 11:49 AM


Nancy
Glad the sun shines for you today.

Earth Angel
Sorry I made you cry. A for each tear.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Angelheart
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5 posted 2005-09-11 01:24 PM


thanks for sharing this...it was good....
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-09-11 01:46 PM


Angelheart
Good is food when understood. Thank you

ctowen
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7 posted 2005-09-11 02:00 PM


Tears do have many different grains of salt ....

        giving flavors to those living, ... savoring

    a wise tear here, good piece!

   CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-09-11 02:34 PM


ctowen
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

iliana
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9 posted 2005-09-11 03:45 PM


"Enough have fallen human dwell
To surely squelch the flame of hell"

Amen to that, Sy.  Brilliant lines! ....jo

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-09-11 05:59 PM


iliana
Thank you my friend.

Margherita
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11 posted 2005-09-11 06:12 PM


quote:
Shaped into elliptic splendor
When pregnant full and ripe
In spite its source, even gender
And gone in just one swipe




A tear described by you acquires new beauty, dear Seymour.

Simply beautiful!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-09-11 08:01 PM


Margherita
For that you get an extra

Susan Caldwell
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13 posted 2005-09-13 10:07 AM


"Enough have fallen human dwell
To surely squelch the flame of hell"

balance....a wishful balance.

  Loved this Sy.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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