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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-09-11 03:58 AM



A place to walk
I'm light as a feather
Grounded on Earth
Just comprehend
Wavy flower...

Mental connection
What the soul says
Staying power
Moving mechanical spirit
Placement by exacts exercise
The streets, dumps, and drugs
Not for me

The tindle hand
Low gentle guide and push
Not forceful
Open the soul of a soldier
Everything is in play

Schism psychosis
Payroll check free
Paralysis temperate
Thin slice in the world
Two worlds remain

Follow this knife and hook
Where do I go?
Burnt fingers and blisters
Cut myself on a guitar string
Bleed here and there, spilt everywhere

Split personality...
      
                          Fly like a butterfly,...  

                or

         a pretty dove...

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
JesusChristPose
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since 2005-06-21
Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa
1 posted 2005-09-11 10:22 AM


I like the "play of contradiction" that is what caught me while reading... or did it turn me loose?


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-09-11 10:26 AM


Good morning, Itchy!

Hmmm! If I were to have a split personality, I would like to

"Fly like a butterfly,...  

                or

         a pretty dove..."




green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2005-09-13 02:00 AM


Jesus rocks! Jesus- I guess you now know why its a, coma...

Earth Angel- Morning to you and Night from me.  I guess its a matter of fluttering or gliding...
Simple simple prescious... lol.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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