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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-09 02:14 PM



Twas in a dream my heartfelt thought was fear and no distance across a street but no idea but what of keep

Once I caressed your hair
Now I buy shampoo
Once I enjoyed your body
Now your mind says
Body lotion "routine"

Once I considered how to live alone
Once I considered a body on my own

In a melt of discs melts essentials fragments into mire and silver or whatever metal you desire

In yourself you are
Everything you have ever been

Words actions thoughts anger stupidity from you begin

To entwane

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california
1 posted 2005-09-10 09:00 AM



most people that i have seen being told their stupid, are usually very intelligent
and i being one who lived from ones not allowing me to "grow" or making sure no one found out truths, was constantly told i was  stupid, angry,psycho,schizo,making up things, but then to them  women are subserviants and are suppose to do a told
     another form of slaves     dont take this personal    i am not    you do write quite well~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-09-10 02:04 PM


thought-provoking
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-09-10 03:45 PM


Reply almost seems to be muscles and of what type and effectiveness

Bodger

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