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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-09 09:54 AM


it is too bad
poets didn't design highways
like they did women with rhyme

so the time it takes
to know them is worthy spend
not just a too fast drive

on and off again

where curves are desirable
and valleys craved

and secret places
worshiped for long moments
with nothing else in mind

but that place in the journey

___________

dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-09-2005 10:56 AM).]

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MGROVES
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california
1 posted 2005-09-09 09:56 AM


and ohh  what a journey

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-09-09 10:22 AM


well, you are never a to fast drive...

loved this...happy weekend to ya

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-09-09 10:58 AM



Obsidian Snow
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since 2005-08-24
Posts 88

4 posted 2005-09-09 01:41 PM


There is something to learn from each one.

I enjoy your thoughts.


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