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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-09 07:58 AM

you showed me the nudity
of your tree skin women
when they bathe there
at the edge of your reasons

their long legged pale
and the playful purpose
of their pretended vulgarity
so slowly tempting reflections

and how did you stuff your windows
with clouds that way
were they children wiggling
against your breasts

or slow handed lovers
dancing willing under your smile
as you leaned them summer dress easy
into the back seat of your camera

_____________

dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-09-2005 09:46 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-09-09 08:05 AM

smiling atcha Dark. Happy Friday!
Enjoyed the flutterby views.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-09-09 09:51 AM

enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-09-09 10:24 AM

hmmmm, slow handed lovers....
now that, my dear poet, is poetry!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2005-09-09 09:23 PM

and how did you stuff your windows
with clouds that way
were they children wiggling
against your breasts

or slow handed lovers
dancing willing under your smile
as you leaned them summer dress easy
into the back seat of your camera
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

only the shutterfly butterfly knows for sure.

lol
anyone ever tell ya that your poetic mind is a deep well.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

5 posted 2005-09-09 10:38 PM

That was good... and edited, wow!!!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-09-09 10:40 PM

DS

Lovely what you can do with words, and what Janet Marie said also is true.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

7 posted 2005-09-10 07:07 PM

mmmmmmm
hell yeah~

~babygirL

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-09-10 07:31 PM

Quite an experience this poem!

Love your style!

Love,
Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-09-10 08:49 PM

Mmmmmm...

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2005-09-10 08:58 PM

Deep well...

it is well, deep...
where only dark strangers
can find moments
of a butterfly's dance...

well done, Sir.

Especially the mind
as a camera.

It leads you to another "wait for it"
poem...

of what may develop.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2005-09-10 09:12 PM

Wow! Very nice.

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