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tatalinia
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0 posted 2005-12-19 11:07 AM


You stood right there looked her in the eye
you lied you swore everything was alright
you held me in your arms you swore things were fine again
you took me in you held me close
you told her things to make her smile
you told her how you loved her so
you told me how you wanted me
you told me how beautiful i was
you told her she was the only one


you liar you loser you bum
you snake you bite then you run
you screw the girls over then leave
to the next one you can deceive

you sat there you smile at me you told me pretty little lies
you wrote me things to make me warm
you told me you believed in me
you told me i was so strong you told me i was going places
you told me i was the one

your day is comin your day is comin
your day is comin real soon its comin real soon

so today you left her out in the rain
she didn't no til i found her an held out my hand
i lifted her up an told her she wasn't alone
but that i knew my pain was nothing compared to hers
i told her better days are to come
that she must remain strong an later she would see
how dirty u turned out to be

you liar you loser you bum
you snake you bite then you run
you screw the girls over then leave
to the next one you can deceive



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majnu
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1 posted 2005-12-19 05:52 PM


reads like an angry rock song, especially with the refrain.

i look forward to seeing more of your work.

-majnu
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-12-19 06:47 PM


oooh, but this one bites


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