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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-07 08:24 AM

haphazarding vanilla
I knew your music's moisture
like the tin can's carpeting

and wore the rattles of nerves
in my loose stringed boots
mud stuck sucking a smile

you said it was just you
pressing the ends of suggestions
into my rib pockets overall

and god I wished for fingers
deeper than just the brushing
of perchances like the tides

over sea grasses on the underside
of some willing la jolla
I knew your eyes instantly then

like the photos in my wish book
when it was the dream sifter's gift
just to make me require more

than my feathered famish could carry

______________

dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-09-07 08:44 AM

how nature so talks to us, doesn't she, and gives us an abundance of what we each so individually need...she is a shine of a soul mate, isn't she?

Hugs and many thanks
Lee J.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-09-07 12:18 PM

I like this

Bodger

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-09-07 01:06 PM

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-09-07 06:27 PM

I think this is my favorite of yours..and will save it...just because~~

MM

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-09-07 06:32 PM

DS

"over sea grasses on the underside
of some willing la jolla
I knew your eyes instantly then"

That is just so pretty!!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2005-09-07 07:15 PM

It's different and I had to read it twice...

awesome.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2005-09-07 09:39 PM

Your writing is just as beautiful as always. I miss reading here.

I am always drawn back to my favorites it seems.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-09-08 04:28 AM

and god I wished for fingers
deeper than just the brushing
of perchances like the tides

~*~

You whisper well...

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