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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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you pull one I'll pull the other dividedivide seam like a double luck two is good as one half is whole hole is whale hale is whelp help is inside there somewhere I know this and smiling at my doublecluck melding the sooner we breast apart the sooner we wing enfolding |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
visual victuals, Brian and can I make a wish upon this one? that it be only one of many to fall gracefully from your pen? you have a way of enfolding this reader |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an awesome way with words! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian I think stars are more trustworthy...or dandi lions. As always you write with such ease of thought...much enjoyed!  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now Bri if you knew me well, you would know right now I am laughing my butt offm as I have absolutely no idea what you are really saying here honest! However, I like what I saw, and that was this, honest!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
serenity peace can go hand in hand~ depends on whos feeding ones mind and on whos land~ indian nations gather all they bred damnations diseases from their so called educated mind took want they needed experiments land of oppitunity stolen so they could get rich breed their filth no truth shall be told as their taken down make a bitch toss in ditch no hitch off us we get filthy they get rich. painted pony carries worrior full of pride painted red they lied i miss his face long grey hair red band and feather now its full head dress some body is creating this stormy weather My spirit will rise |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...you win...some...thing.... she's going to smile when she comes back to read this one... and me? I'm jealous!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
" I know this and smiling at my doublecluck melding the sooner we breast apart the sooner we wing enfolding" Smiling at you, Bri... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A great way of expressing hope, I think....but confess I don't get it all. ....jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I miss you, something fierce.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you don't write as often as i wish you would, but you do write as i wish i could. i didn't mean for that to rhyme i swear. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My day is the richer for reading your poem. Thank you. I enjoyed you both pulling on the wishbone and wishing and I loved the way your mind leaped from there to the first stepping stone and then another and then returned to where you began, encapsulating this sensual love poem within the arms of the wishbone. - Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (11-25-2005 01:08 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
On TurkeyDay.... even the Vegans would want this  . |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
~this drew me in~ niiiice~ ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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