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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-09-05 08:07 PM

Crowned With Golden Laurels

High thunder has blessed the Elysian skies where God has set her beauty sacred upon the cherubim. Where my soul has grown and my love brings forth it’s message, dearly delivering it to her heart.

The immortal maker of beauty, She is an image of God’s art. With eyes of a tireless sun, every new moon and the brightest stars. Standing before a Goddesses temple made of heaven and earth;

The world shall be governed by the sweet splendor of a queen crowned in golden laurels. One that shall scorch  the sea and melt the earth with a brightly burning passion for love.

Kingdoms shall not rest from praise, and stairways shall fall from heaven, wings will uplift her steps and dwell by fair shrines and pursue her way unto the light of my hearts tribe.

Copyright (C) Kevin Brian Wright 2005

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SarBear
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1 posted 2005-09-06 03:08 PM

This is really good...amazing imagery.

lyricpoet
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2 posted 2005-09-06 03:25 PM

Thank you for your thoughts on my work...greatly appreciated

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-09-07 06:29 AM

wow! reads almost like a decree!

love this!

lyricpoet
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4 posted 2005-09-07 07:23 AM

thank you for your comment

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-09-07 10:20 AM

this woman you write of, somehow I feel, and I don't know why, that the love you two share, need not be spoken to each other, as in just a deep gaze into each other's eyes, speaks silent soft words that only two can understand, in a smile of approval, or brushing strands of hair from the face...soft and gentle moments of silence between you, orchastrate volumns of understanding about each other...or...am I living in a fantasy world?

Anyway, that is the feeling I gained from this lovely write of yours.

Hugs to both of you

lyricpoet
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6 posted 2005-09-07 11:07 AM

No your not living in a fantasy world. Thank your for you kind reply.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-09-07 11:13 AM

lyricpoet
When I was young I thought young
Now that I am old I'm not as bold.
Enjoyed

lyricpoet
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8 posted 2005-09-07 11:32 AM

Thanks for your reply

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