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Locks of her hair
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Locks of her hair |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Often I look down in my hands In my mind In What hair was she a lock of I never knew Why feel herself Was trapped within sight of you What words between us That never faced trust What words could make us When we could not make a truss In her hair Failed me to seek her mind and to be within my own mind and kind and kind of different kinds deciding nothing as I failed to understand mine and mind In your earth you ask not for rejection you asked for life In this world I didn't consider what saw the light as you arose and others watched as I did not In this world you dont know But your self Does And like a strength you feel you must make amends Like your eyes and wishes and ignorance I withdraw from these words Only to see from a distance Bodger |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bodger "Like your eyes and wishes and ignorance I withdraw from these words Only to see from a distance" I've found, that in order to see more clearly, it is many times best to move away. From a distance many things become clear. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bodger You got a symbols field day. Enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
have to agree with Martie here |
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