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HopeS
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0 posted 2005-09-05 07:32 AM



During Times Such As This

Why have I been hesitating
It as never happened before
Had everything been said
Should I be writing you more

Should I keep my distance
Is this the time I should wait
There was so much doubt
Giving me reason to hesitate

Should I cast doubts aside
Write just as I have planned
If I say whats on my mind
Perhaps you will understand

Pondering as I think of you
I allowed thoughts to collect
Still I search for the words
Of ones that used to connect

There was more I could say
During the time such as this
So I write I love you notes
You being the one I still miss

Hope ©2005
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LoveBug
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1 posted 2005-09-05 10:19 AM


This is so pretty, and so sad. It is hard to keep loving someone, but I hope that you get some love back as well (if this poem is true to life!). Well written!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-09-07 12:16 PM


Yes - I agreed

Bodger

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