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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-09-04 04:15 PM

We give ourselves to
this -

The twilights kiss of awakening
darkness...as the day folds
against the night in a
warm embrace.

Nothing remains but a moment lost
upon itself.

Soon...night will enter fully.

And we will step into its
arms.

Changed by this moment of
surrender.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2005-09-04 04:45 PM

Another masterpiece, Eric. Beautiful!

"Changed by this moment of
surrender."

Yes! And there are many such moments in a lifetime.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-09-04 04:46 PM

I'm with Honeybunch, Ericc....a masterpiece!

.......jo

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-09-04 05:10 PM

To

Bodger

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-09-04 06:20 PM

gorgeous Eric
as always

you never fail

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-09-06 02:34 PM

I keep reading and re-reading the ending... yes... it is just so. *S*

Beautiful write!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2005-09-10 05:58 PM

In your eyes

twilight reflects.

Spellbound

by this dance

of light and shadow

I surrender

to the call of the night.

I find my way into sweetness

guided by your divine light,

which is never hidden.

I find access

into the arms of love.

Where all wounds heal

where we reach nirvana.
So so beautiful and inspiring, dear Eric!

I love you,
Margherita

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2005-09-10 06:54 PM

this is lovely ....a true romantic...

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

8 posted 2005-09-10 07:40 PM

uh uh yes indeed romantic

I like it! thanks for sharing....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-09-10 08:22 PM

I'm pleased this one came back up
as I was on vacation when you posted Eric.
This one is very special...thank you.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2005-09-10 08:34 PM

Eric

You made me think about moments and change...and how that each moment that passes, the next finds us changed. I think this is a good thing. As always your poetry is inspiring!

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