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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2005-09-03 09:25 PM



Scattered into particles of light
We breathe together absent sound or sight
We breathe and hold a higher court
Discussions silent of a sort
That is the absolute of surety, sweet purity

As this possession still a wilderness
Where seeking ceases, making creases into time
To look upon angelic robes there strobes divine
Two beacons beckon
Sharing only what a spirit might deny

Scattered to the lingered flames of more
Traveling along the curves of distant shore
Salivating for the want of always
Deaf and blind the heart for certain small ways
Speed is not the key to talk or turn to keep

But still, a longing fill
With every gaze insight displays
Where here before me lined in petals of the rose
All so pertinent the body knows
There we begin, and sunsets leave a hush upon the past

Copyright Kkh 09/03/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2005-09-03 09:35 PM


All so pertinent the body knows
There we begin, and sunsets leave a hush upon the past

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Oh my, what a perfect ending to the "want of always"

As always, Kathleen~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-09-03 09:39 PM


a beautifully done write, very touching

Bluesy good to see you again

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-09-03 10:34 PM


Thanks gals...good to see you both again.
TD

Ericc
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4 posted 2005-09-04 04:12 PM


Excellent write!!

Eric

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2005-09-04 06:18 PM


Kathleen~
Good to see YOU~

'Discussions silent of a sort
That is the absolute of surety, sweet purity'


Some of the best discussions I've ever experienced ... were exactly like this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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