Feel the aching- feel the aching,

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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2005-09-03 09:25 AM

Feel the aching- feel the aching,
As the escaping of a leaf twists in its fall-
once I were a tree- with a tear in its eyes
and thus thy memory free from me,
enchanted in its far off beauty before the drowning-
in some emotional sea that gathered all the
sunken hearts in the lovers graveyard.

Tis the blushing of the mind upon more memories,
That thou art in my world of mourn-
the shadow of the feeling on my face
which thou never stroked by I stroked for thee,
Ah, less- upon closed eyes,
doth the aching seem more than-
the needle from a thorn once quoted love
and never a flake of doubt now vapour,

Care not for I care not for me,
only stars shall be the ones I see-
that never seem to lose their light
as if they were put out for an everlasting,
Could compare thee to a thousand other details-
but comparing is nothing more than wanting
perfection is acceptance of whom thee was and are.

No doubt- now pain,
come never again towards me-
as if a stranger doth not appear taken
for her she was and were and is,
and all day and night long alike-
a thought that never left my mind
free like the day she arrived.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-09-03 09:44 AM

Hi, Lee!

You eloquently expressed the "aching" ~ and I felt it. That was sheer poetry! A very emotive piece of fine writing.

I enjoyed the old-world charm that spilled from your quill.

"Care not for I care not for me,
only stars shall be the ones I see-
that never seem to lose their light
as if they were put out for an everlasting"

~ Yes, the stars are forever there, shining brightly! ~ Even when they are obscured by clouds from our view...

Starlight wishes,
Linda

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-09-03 01:01 PM

Lee~

'only stars shall be the ones I see-
that never seem to lose their light
as if they were put out for an everlasting'

I DO like this part very much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2005-09-03 07:06 PM

this gave me goosebumps...When I read words like these I just get all *sigh* I don't know..speechless...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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