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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-03 07:50 AM



Reading a book
Late at night
Sound of cannon


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ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2005-09-03 09:09 AM


Your poems have great impact...
The sound of a cannon blast, breaking concentration...perhaps not audible, perhaps a  vibration of thought, instead of a physical cannon sound....streaming from the image constructed in the mind, from words read..

This happens to me when I read good poetry that sounds out loud, enlightenment,
Or a lesson unheeded from history.

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2005-09-03 04:33 PM


I like that one.  Very much.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-26 05:02 PM


read a better book before sleep.
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