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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2005-09-03 02:17 AM



Breathe
if
I could
remember to....

I would live
in your skin
forever.

How subtle
your silent,
painful words
describe me
perfectly.

And
I continue
to understand completely
why
it will never
haunt me so dearly..

I will
forget.

© Copyright 2005 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2005-09-03 08:43 AM


Deep ....
     not only in breaths.

  a collective calm to these words,
       as if each one was still in thought.

        hope your skies are clearing ....


  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-09-03 09:09 AM


In time, you will forget the pain and all that will remain will be warm memories of the good times you once had together.

Such a delicate and poignant penning. Sending a loving hug to both you and Freyja.

Linda

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displaced
3 posted 2005-09-04 01:56 AM


awesome!
Ericc
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4 posted 2005-09-04 04:12 PM


Wow...!!!

Eric

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2005-11-23 11:33 AM


ugh, this is soooo hallmark..
ah sarcasm, it's in the bone. you capture the shadows so well

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