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lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2005-09-02 08:44 PM

I wonder if its healthy
Or if its all even true
time slips away
and so have you

I always felt a certin way
Each time you came near
Its like a force too strong to control
How I counted the days you werent here

My heart has decived me plenty of times
How should I know
I am such a fool

Love passes me up
Like I am not even here
Everything around me reminds me of you
And then it all comes to a clear

The times we were together
You could have let me know
Instead of pulling me sideways
And letting me take the blow

I could have sworn you felt it too
The way you looked at me
But perhaps I missed the obvious signs
I was just to blind to see

I see you once again
And its funny
Because I know its the last time

You embrase me
You hold me
and once again
Im fooled.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-09-02 08:48 PM

I know what you mean here, what you're feeling, for sure

sadly beautiful write

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2005-09-09 02:53 AM

this is one of the most sad but beautifully emotionalized pieces I have ever read.....wonderfully expressed and heartfelt.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2005-09-09 07:11 AM

I know how that feels

Hope

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-09-09 11:05 AM

Yes....understanding here as well.
Enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-09-09 11:17 AM

Very well said indeed...enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-09-09 01:07 PM

enjoyed this very much Lisa.

Very good beginning (grabbing) stanza...and very well done ending.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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