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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-02 03:34 PM



Structure is a backroad meaning you think you have an edge on
When the crew travel before you

They travel very seldom
And arrive

Always thoughts badly organised
Trimmed

Like all images
We trust

And find their opportunties

Are not ours

So we live off theirs

Living ours

Theirs hang it together

So we can bring the audience

Who forget them

And dont know us

Money goes where money goes

We work an image

They work on money

And like every group

We say this because it is how you feel writing

The Phone Number

Tonights the night
Didn’t sleep well
First to pay me attention I can recall
I want her
To have a ball
Met John for lunch
Advice, he’s got a bunch
Bought the latest smells
Showered so much
They stop me at the traffic
Green gel upon my bed
Yellow flashing on my back
She stood me up
Thank the world for that
When on my back
A ratatatatat
Then she laughed
And smiled

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