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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-02 07:33 AM

there under the velvet armor
of a samurai night
my eyes brail finger the outlines
of the wall of ravens

their soot black shadows with sheen
nervous footing the magic wire
do they know the vibrations are not god
only the radio man's soothsay

my ears hear their voices now
as they chant their story
foreign languages to the dead men
but still we nod our recognition

of just the hollow in their sounds

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dark

scribblenote: a place by the ocean where hundreds of ravens have meetings nightly..they say it is the christian radio station that draws them to listen.."and every ear shall hear"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-09-02 07:47 AM

It's fall...

they gather.

You brought home, home again.

Thank you.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-09-02 11:09 AM

DS Yes, they gather, there, and in your words.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-09-02 11:10 AM

life through your eyes is a wonderful thing D. Hugs.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2005-09-02 11:54 AM

The vision of their gathering opens clearly with your words...What a stunning vision it must be...As I sit here talking to the bluejays as they come and sit on my desk I am touched by the way your words come to life...Amazing...*big hugs*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2005-09-02 03:58 PM

Humble thanks to you for your eyes...and a lesson learned today...don't walk under them looking up...seems their timing is accidental (grin)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-09-02 04:54 PM

Dark~
You word-painted a vision for me~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-09-02 05:47 PM

would love to see this
thanks for the insight

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

8 posted 2005-09-02 05:59 PM

That's cool!!

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

9 posted 2005-09-09 01:35 PM

Uniquely descriptive.

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