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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-09-02 05:21 AM



Lay your dreams
at my feet,
through nightfalls quietude.
A revenant you
are, moving through
my conciousness, catching
hold of my
word trail as
i fly through
cochineal midnight clouds.
You cannot follow
me now, even
though your butterfly
wings crash to
where i write,
it ends now,
you wanted neither
me, nor my
sickness, only words,
nationality, smarts, trophies.
Part way out,
but no going
back, other''pets''
await my scrutiny.
To dream freely,
be thought of
in noble terms,
without emerald eyes,
is my want.
Ulterior thoughts never
shadowed my mind,
altruistic acts preoccupy,
supercede my life.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (09-02-2005 06:12 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-09-02 06:01 AM


"it ends now, you wanted neither
me, nor my
sickness, only words,
nationality, smarts, trophies."

~ How very sad it is to have such feelings.

Remember, Dear Phil, you are a rose of pure gold! Single Yellow Rose

Love & Light,
Linda


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2 posted 2005-09-02 06:20 AM


Linda..thank you for your reply...it IS sad to have these kinds of feelings...but now i am looking forward and can be the rose of gold from here on...at the moment the rose has a humid withered..slightly tired look...but it shall bloom again..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-09-02 06:31 AM


Phil, one who is as kind, gentle, and loving as you are, should never have to feel this way.

May you soon be back in full bloom  radiating glorious, golden rays of sun.


Linda

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4 posted 2005-09-02 08:25 PM


sounds as though you are saying goodbye...maybe to superman? (teasing you) enjoyed....
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5 posted 2005-09-02 08:28 PM


you know where I am
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