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Silent Words |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I could feel the finger trace as I read every word. A whisper of warm breathe, just enough to stir the hair and send a shiver of anticipation down my spine. I hear your voice in my dreams. I scream your words in the deepest parts of myself. I close my eyes and imagine the way your lips form each word, as if the words themselves were made for your lips. I wish for you to finger paint those words of your heart on my skin. Grafting their meaning to me forever. I feel you touching the wounded places. Expelling all but the purity of your love Loyalty and trust, and I want to live inside you. I want to read the mystery of you In each beat of your heart Letting it tell me your story I dream each sentence is a secret message urging me to swallow the intent allowing it to flow freely within you, who has written me in love you, who’s smell I long for in the dark of night dispel this soon vestige of hopelessness so I may drink your words, your wisdom living in you, through you, beside you for the eternity you write of with your eyes "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This one has just gotta be about ME!  one phone call, and see what happens?  "I hear your voice in my dreams." tsk...I was afraid this would happen. (gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!) Seriously tho, whomever your muse might be has fawned a gentle lovely side of you in this cool breeze of verse. (but I tell ya, it really is all about me!) *hugs you* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
darlin, this was incredible, and helped me to remember faintly, what I knew so long ago it draws out compassion, heaping the reader with one hell of a jolt...in this your humble innocence of love...and a nice place to be...inside of him.... Hugs to ya...  and thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lol *cough* of course it is about you!!! you had me at hello?? LMAO alright, so maybe that is only funny to me. Thank you Karen! For your reply and the chat.  And Lee? Thank you for always, without fail, taking the time. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
dang girl! not sure where this came from, but i like it! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sigh. Wouldn't it be nice?  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sometimes a voice heard, can touch us so deeply and give such lovely memories to cherish. Well done m'friend, so good to see your smile shine here today! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wish for you to finger paint those words of your heart on my skin. Grafting their meaning to me forever. I feel you touching the wounded places. Expelling all but the purity of your love Loyalty and trust, and I want to live inside you. I want to read the mystery of you In each beat of your heart Letting it tell me your story ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my oh my oh my..... do I love this... oh yes... as a matter of fact...it is one of those poems that makes me say IWIHWT!!! yes I do... but you did and you did it delightfully...nothing like being well inspired. very cool write poetess Susan. Im not asking for a moment, all I want is time |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I wish for you to finger paint those words of your heart on my skin. Grafting their meaning to me forever. I feel you touching the wounded places. Expelling all but the purity of your love Loyalty and trust, and I want to live inside you. I want to read the mystery of you In each beat of your heart Letting it tell me your story Sighhh Susan, I too wish i had written this....Beautiful! and a  Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
I like the way you finger paint girl. This is awesome and I am bumping it back to the top. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, stand up and take a bow! ~ No, a curtsy, for this truly was written by a real woman!  Linda |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I hear your voice in my dreams. I scream your words in the deepest parts of myself. I close my eyes and imagine the way your lips form each word, as if the words themselves were made for your lips. I wish for you to finger paint those words of your heart on my skin. Grafting their meaning to me forever." Excellent write Myrtle. Have I mentioned lately that...you rock?!?!?! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief it slid and I missed it! This is the part that I simply ADORED... I wish for you to finger paint those words of your heart on my skin. Grafting their meaning to me forever Now...if you could find me a man willing to do just that, maybe then, and only then would I ever consider sharing my sink again. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Have I told you guys lately that I love you? I take strength from your words. All of you, each provide something different and filling. Thank you for that. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you've grown, it shows! enjoyed the chat.... hugsss you.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
My pleasure Lauren! and thank you for always being a soft place here at pip. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful write, the italic sections are cool. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Meg!!!!! (did you read just the italic together?) "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done Ms Susan.... nice to read you again..and especially to read something this well done... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a cool fingerpainting! a smooth soothing flow of visuals |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
someones in love........the softness the vulnerability the submission, you wear it well my dear, enjoy |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I dream each sentence is a secret message urging me to swallow the intent allowing it to flow freely within" Love looks good on you, Susan! ....jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I wish for you to finger paint those words of your heart on my skin." ...uh...are we taking edible paints here...or what? *grin* |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
You know sue, this was a really good poem. Nothing personal, but a good write, Steve. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You guys are really great, thank you all. and Steve? Thank you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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