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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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When I said, I didn't love you, When I said goodbye, I cried, I lied.... My heart knows the truth, my soul trys to compromise, now loss I feel, I confess ... I lied.... Truth came in pain, tears shed the light, my heart wears your stain, when loving you was right, but I lied....I tried, I cried... I died....you remain. "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Nicely written, holding so much truth of so many who have broken hearts, each harnessed by regret and never to forget. Sincerely Rick |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ARH, we often lie to ourselves as well... Confession is good for the heart and for those we have wronged. May the slate be wiped clean and allow your love to grow and to be returned once more.  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my, this is so touching, and sad at the end |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This would make a good bluesy song, ARH! ....jo |
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