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Still postcards (RP for Karen and New Orleans)
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Still postcards (RP for Karen and New Orleans) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Misty morning New Orleans. Sidewalk, ramble worn smooth, cracked through bloodshot eyes, stoned puddles, streetlights sketch black and white rainbows through the fog. Steps into blocks, turn till I am finally home, too chilled for October. What is this? A fire already seduces from hearth, ‘Come rest, come warm’. How can that be, has someone visited? No, see… only figments warm echo of imagination still hang from the night. Was it just then, I held her? Misty mornings still postcards, signed with love. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You write with your heart.  has someone visited? No, see… only figments warm echo of imagination still hang from the night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Dunc... thank you, puppy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan I've been down that path thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Duncan, all I can say is hugs, and thank you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Misty mornings still postcards, signed with love." ~ A aptly succinct closing to a very fine write.  Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*sniff* I remember this... and love it even more now.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
nice poem. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Duncan and going directly into my library. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan....full of a beautiful heart! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 what a sweetheart! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love you baby. thank you |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I remember those postcards of New Orleans…the mist, in the dawn…so beautiful, so serene, so majestic. It truly is my favourite city in the US and I mourn for what it’s going through now. I pray that it’s beauty will remain after this is over, but most of all I pray for those who have lost so much there. Hopefully Dunc, that postcard won’t be your last look at New Orleans as she was. And thank God Serenity and all are safe and well. You can never win or lose |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Duncan... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I guess I missed this the first time around. Yes...Those damned figments! Sometimes they clutter everything up, eh? Nice, m'friend! Very nice |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Have I mentioned that you have a way with words!? and that I really..I mean REALLY enjoy reading you  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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