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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Shall I offer her a leg of wood for cooking Shall I often her a heart burnt at sea Shall I offer arms worn too often Shall I ask her what she desires of me |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*grin* It goes both ways, you know...Maybe you should just tell her what you desire of her...I enjoyed reading this poem...*big hugs* |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Maybe I am afraid of the answer Startime Bodger |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Shall I offer her a leg of wood for cooking only when the fire's not looking Shall I often her a heart burnt at sea I wouldn't do it, if it were me! Shall I offer arms worn too often I'm sure her heart would quickly soften! Shall I ask her what she desires of me only if she has heard your plea!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this! excellent! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed, Bodger. I'd say, go ahead! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Only if you can't stop yourself...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! That's one heckuvvalotta giving! Perhaps you could throw in your soul for good measure! lol Perhaps you could have some of your desires met as well! After reading this poem, she surely would come up with some ideas of her own regarding loving you!   EA |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks for your answers I sound like an ansaphone or a message in the ear that wasn't all alone You gave me a poem - not the "I was being jokey - please press 5 for the country etc., and the message "you have failed to specify your universe" kind of message. Must go "I think I left a poem running" Thanks everyone And I am taking the fun Bodger |
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