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OH,430..........{CST}
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OH,430..........{CST} |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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OH,430 [CST] August, even late, when one might still make lemonade from those handed out on a take it or leave it platter. [So goes my little corner of the world.] Stars greeted me along their milky way specter of moon’s shadow full in view, its low gold belly starting to swell a mental, momentary trip of my own loss but it begs to be forgiven look at me! Rewarded by a falling star wishes abound! heeled by the immediacy of gift love comes via sincerity. Pines brush walnut leaves, oak trees drop acorns that may one day reign the scent of summer, waning and chirping crickets and whirring katydids would hush and warn of danger, if danger had slid this far north, and west. There, brilliant stars in full view again, as many as might be counted… so numerous; almost as many as are my thoughts ~ prayers and wishes for the all, and you. ~*~ © Karilea Rilling Jungel August 31, 2005 |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
a lot of thoughts, a lot of prayers ... a lot of YOU these days have been grey and scattered but your words shine quite clear! nice to have shared the same sky. CT |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine What ever but you are still my sunshine.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I ditto what you've so deeply described from a very lovely poetess...this my dear, is one of my favorites of yours...I think, if it be ok with you, I'll put this on my refrigerator, so I may read and be lifted during those not so nice times...  I loved this... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I see beautiful SUN rays shining this morning even though it is dark and ominous here at the moment! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nicely penned, my friend. Wish it were starting to look like fall here. It's bloody hot! Corinne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much emotion...  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, dear  ... this is lovely, SIL. ....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
so numerous; almost as many as are my thoughts ~ prayers and wishes for the all, and you. ~*~ Sissie....you are so spirit lovely...thank you for writing this and for your heart! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I'm not allowed on a family site to repeat some words from Blazing Saddles but "you do have a pretty tongue" and "Words" Bodger |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your heart shines with a brilliance that dims the light of the stars...Our prayers join you words and follow them to listening ears...You have done a wonderful thing and will be remembered because of your great love forever....*big hugs* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written, from deep within the heart and soul of a beautiful poetess. They remain in my prayers and thoughts. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Rewarded by a falling star wishes abound! heeled by the immediacy of gift love comes via sincerity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Every storm holds a promise in some form or another. I may have said my prayers in silence, but they were always there during the long wane. You are a fine example Karilea, that the sun will rise above. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful words. JL  |
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