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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-08-30 07:19 PM



Wind Whispers
~*Marge Tindal*~

She is the wind in whispers,
across the plain of memories
“Come feel me again.” says she
“I live in breaths of your ecstasy.”

“I caress the days of old
with memories of your gentle recall.”
“I am the wind in whispers
keeping the beauty of your all.”

“Swirling back to greet you
on a day of soft remind.”
“These are the rewind moments
kept for the all of time.”

“For I am wind … I know all things.”
“On just a breeze … I can bring
remembering embers to warm you
when the night has fallen chill”
“I am wind, whispering warmly to you still.”

“Let my currents surround you,
holding you tenderly,
for I am wind …
I know all things.”

“I am wind … I give you wings.”

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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sandgrain
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1 posted 2005-08-30 09:11 PM


How precious, Marge.  A windfall of gentle reminders.  Thank you for sharing.

   Rae

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2 posted 2005-08-30 09:21 PM


Magical and mysterious, Marge my friend.


Corinne

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3 posted 2005-08-30 10:29 PM


Dear Marge:  Very beautiful!  The wind has always seemed "otherworldly" to me!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty
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4 posted 2005-08-30 10:54 PM


Beautiful
PatAngel
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5 posted 2005-08-30 11:12 PM


What a beautiful poem you have shared with us! I've always loved the feel of a gentle wind.

Love,
Patricia

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For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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6 posted 2005-08-31 07:59 AM


Dear Marge

The wind always catches my breath and this verse of yours left me breathless, so to speak!

What a wonderful poem, indeed!

Love Isobel xo


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7 posted 2005-08-31 10:42 AM


Oh, this is good to see......and I see it, thanks to the luscious way you wrote this!

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8 posted 2005-08-31 01:48 PM


Very beautiful.

Eric

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9 posted 2005-08-31 02:44 PM


Beautiful

It's only a tragedy after we bleed.
Your pain doesn't count 'til it's stained the sheets.

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10 posted 2005-08-31 10:47 PM


very touching write Marge
how'd I miss it?

well, no matter. I found it now

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11 posted 2005-08-31 11:03 PM


I hear her whispering thru this beautiful piece, Marge!   ....jo
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2005-09-01 09:53 AM


I sincerely thank you all ... this one just blew gently through my ink~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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13 posted 2005-09-01 04:33 PM


This is absolutely lovely! *S*
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14 posted 2005-09-04 11:24 PM


The wind is certainly a mystic and a magical grace.  Uplifting write...well done Marge.
TD

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15 posted 2005-09-07 06:26 PM


always beautifull~
a breath  of fresh air
you give along with light
brings smiles and a day of peace~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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16 posted 2005-09-07 06:32 PM


What a serene poem this is!  I think I'll earmark it for a day I need to hear that wind again.  A real beauty!

          miscellanea

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17 posted 2005-09-10 05:01 PM


Silky Marge...James
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18 posted 2005-09-10 06:36 PM


“Let my currents surround you,
holding you tenderly,
for I am wind …
I know all things.”

“I am wind … I give you wings.”



Very beautifully expressed, dear Marge!

The wind carries your poetic voice with true grace.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Angelheart
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19 posted 2005-09-10 07:44 PM


this is good...thanks for sharing......
Beki
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20 posted 2005-09-11 08:47 PM


beautiful
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