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Abe
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since 2003-05-28
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2005-08-30 11:56 AM




The force of Mother Nature
Has washed upon our shore
With a fierce, hellish fury
Like we’ve never seen before.

Homes and businesses flooded
By tens of thousands, maybe more
The cost, up in the billions
But we have lost so much more.

The beauty of the new and old
Wiped out in this storm’s path
Some completely blown away
By Hurricane Katrina’s wrath.

From Florida towards the North
She has wreaked Her havoc
But, of those “things” destroyed
Most all, can be built back.

But when someone’s life is lost
They will be gone forever
There will be no second chance
To heed those warnings, never.

For some there was no option
“Wrong place at the wrong time”
But, many who “rode it out”
Won’t have that choice, next time.

It may take weeks, months, or years
To clean up and to rebuild
But the void left by some losses
Will never heal, or be refilled.

08-30-2005


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity.

© Copyright 2005 Del - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
1 posted 2005-08-30 05:34 PM


Very good. I enjoyed your thoughts .. Good to see you posting. martyjo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-08-31 12:25 PM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-08-31 06:10 AM


indeed Del, it's a sad situation...so very sad
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
4 posted 2005-09-06 12:02 PM


Very well said. I don't know anyone personally that lost their life, but it is a tragic situation for all involved. New Orleans certainly will never be the same, glad I got to visit there just a few years ago.
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