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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-08-30 04:34 AM



It already exists
In plastic perfection
Engineered tracks and mind-connection

Cut the chaos
The darkest places
A talent show of broken strings
Pouring their blood in pipes and tubes
Underlying spread

The foundation
Vast spread with no roof or ceiling
Closing in, pinch a nerve
Busted pipe and sewage drain
Building, destroying...

This has to be tall,
So much expectation
Come here and here it goes...

My soul opens to give the truth
I come here for you
Decieve you through predictable deception
A future context, but sure enough its true
An underlying trap
All for little ole you

Gain the trust,
Fill with love,
Let you walk right in,
Touch those lips,
Sweet sunset desire...

This demon is tormenting me
Spray! hiss
Blooming kiss
Bent fairytales,

           LEAVE ME ALONE!!!

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-30 12:55 PM


whoa, never looked at New York as such...this was gripping....
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-08-31 12:59 PM


Yeah, this could be a pretty screwed up piece if it weren't entirely abstract.  New York for me is my mind which has just as much complexity, if not more than New York.  But I think thats how it is for everyone.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

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