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RennieandBoo
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since 2003-09-02
Posts 47
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0 posted 2005-08-29 02:47 PM


how canI see?
the world in front of my eyes
how am I me?
she cries

I don't know how
the world turns
I want a wow
baby it burns

to see someone look away
Just becuase I'm not the same
Why can't someone stay

In my life
I'm alone
I got no strife
I'm not well known

I turn and look
someone's looking back
I feel my heart shook
its a heart attack

is it true
looking at me
checked around,no one is here
how can this be?

I'm just me
I'm just someone in the dark
here's my heart
don't break it

Each one of us deserves some special lovin!

© Copyright 2005 Rennie - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-08-29 05:10 PM


A poignant piece of poetry!

May you be able to step out into the light and know you are never alone, you are lovable.
Embrace your shadow and give it a smile... and then you will see!
Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-08-29 06:03 PM


a poignant plea!
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