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Open Poetry #36

Darkness on light

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-08-29 10:06 AM

from the ankles to a mind
from legs to
A thought
of kind

from images blending mine
from movement there are
Times
of kind

whatching evaporating feeling off my milk
Movement like dance
Purple on silk
Dancing on feeling
Just like a souk

Dancing like a singer
Who words beat around

Think I stop writing
Writing those words

Without music

Just fumbles around

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-08-29 05:02 PM

... and if it was light on darkness?

There is this dancing movement that makes your words light.

Your words ask to be put on page, why disappoint them, they flow very nicely.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-08-29 06:28 PM

sometimes, it's all about
makin your own music

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2005-08-30 01:34 AM

I agree with the other two.

:-)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-08-30 02:36 AM

do I ever understand this

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