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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Morning finds me One day closer To salvation Or a few thousand In the other direction Whatever the case may be Doesn’t much matter which I suppose Seein’s how I’m too stubborn To turn around now. I’m all out of ideas anyway As to what constitutes Good and bad Much less Right or wrong Seems the years Have fogged these eyes To the point those lines in the sand don’t mean much anymore so I’ll just toss my stick aside and wander this suff’ring road till another day finds me or the night calls me home. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
till another day finds me or the night calls me home''' ~ all lines lead somewhere... I am betting both...  Good to be reading you again..hugsss you...  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
---------------------- there's my line i dare you to step over |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
color outside the lines a while and let it all be |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"I'm all out of ideas anyway" yeah, I know what you mean good to read you again...stick around awhile? |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Morning finds me One day closer To salvation Or a few thousand In the other direction Man, do I ever know this thought. I thoroughly enjoyed this. http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Seems the years Have fogged these eyes To the point those lines in the sand don’t mean much anymore" From the heart, this one.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Seems the years Have fogged these eyes To the point those lines in the sand don’t mean much anymore" I had to quote them again... raw and honest. the lines are a matter of perspective...don't cha know?  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
just a little rant, i suppose... been thinking a lot about how the values i was taught don't seem to mean much in this old world anymore. thanks for reading and putting up with me! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You make think you're seeing through fog... but you speak with startling clarity. *S* This is wonderful, my friend... a somber reflection that invites us all to think. *S* |
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