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Open Poetry #36

You complete me

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2005-08-27 06:06 PM

Collasping
Venus
Stars
tantalizing
eye lids
distant
dreams
broadcast
loud
over the radio
unspoken
frequencies
turn the dial
of broken
thoughts
scattered
deja vu
piercing
my skin
as I hear
your words
over and over
again
on the other end
telephone
never disconnects
when I
fall deep within
you
everytime
being myself
so casual
so easy
when I'm
in your thoughts
when you're
hitting pause
on being
self conscience
insecurities
no longer
demanding
your attention
no longer
demanding mine
hitting fast forward
erasing the past
free falling into your eyes
You complete me...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-27 06:12 PM

nice tumbling freefall!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-08-27 11:27 PM

DANG!

M'lady?

You complete

ME!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-08-28 08:07 PM

wow! what a write!

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

4 posted 2005-08-28 10:18 PM

When you disappeared from PIP a year ago, I wondered what had become of you, and from time to time wondered if you were still writing...

I am glad to see that you were, as this shows you have indeed matured as a poet in that time.

Great Job.

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