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Duck Season

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 08-26-2005 05:36 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


The dawn sun
Has just begun to cast a pale blue
On the swampy ground

An old man and his old dog
Wait patiently among the reeds

Itís not because they have to hunt
In order for their larder to be stocked with food

No more than anything really has to die
And yet they do
  
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1 posted 08-26-2005 06:24 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I felt the still, heavy air surrounding the man and the dog. Vivid visuals, John
Martie
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Many things happen, just because they do.  Your imagery cast a picture in my mind that holds on.  So well done!
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life...the spirit of action
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